Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

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Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Post by benjamindaymon » Tue Oct 14, 2008 10:41 pm

Following is a link to my Halloween poem entitled: Whole World Hidden - Comments appreciated. -- Thanks!

http://www.associatedcontent.com/articl ... _poem.html

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Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Post by OctoberChill » Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:41 am

GREAT poem. One of the best Halloween poems I've read, and I've read a lot.

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Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Post by benjamindaymon » Thu Oct 16, 2008 2:08 am

Well thank you very much. :o That's about the nicest compliment I could have hoped for.

Happy Halloween!

Ben

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Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Post by Andybev01 » Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:14 pm

You kiddin' Me...?

That was fantastic!
All you that doth my grave pass by,
As you are now so once was I,
As I am now so you must be,
Prepare for death & follow me.

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Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Post by Halloween_crazyy » Thu Oct 16, 2008 11:56 pm

Wow thats amazing! :D
H A P P Y H A L L O W E E N !

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Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Post by adrian » Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:43 pm

That poem was very entertaining. I love to read independent writers works and that was quite a piece of art. Loved it. :)
Last night 'twas witching Hallowe'en
Dearest; an apple russet- brown
I pared, and thrice above my crown
Whirled the long skin; they watched in keen;
I flung it far; they laughed and cried me shame
Dearest, there lay the letter of your name!

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Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Post by grim writer » Thu Oct 30, 2008 4:34 pm

wow that was awesome you're a great writer :D
You're a great friend but if the zombies chase us i'm tripping you
When witches go riding,
and black cats are seen,
the moon laughs and whispers,
‘tis near Halloween.

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Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Post by benjamindaymon » Fri Oct 31, 2008 1:58 am

Thanks again, everyone for your comments. It's good to get feedback and even better when it's positive.

Happy Halloween!

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