ghost ryme

Hallow's Queen · Post by **Hallow's Queen** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 5:37 pm

here's one of my little ghost rymmes.....

down the road
its dark and scary
watch out behind you
you need to stay wary

if you look closer
you can see them watch
from behind the bushes
and the dark crept knocks in the dark

you can't see whats in front of you
but you still keep going too
but then you just stop because every thing's glowing

then see eyes trailing your tail
to bad your to far off the trail
then you here a hoot and you start running

sadly they find you body just lying
they say it was an accident
but i know
that when you wonder in the dark
all the ghost may roam

Catzilla · Post by **Catzilla** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 7:25 pm

I like it.

Cadaverino · Post by **Cadaverino** » Sat Sep 29, 2007 3:13 am

What happened to the rhyme?

HalloweenGeneral · Post by **HalloweenGeneral** » Sat Sep 29, 2007 6:26 pm

Really a poem doesnt need to ryme...even though that was the name of the thread.

Cadaverino · Post by **Cadaverino** » Sat Sep 29, 2007 7:09 pm

Well, if you call it a rhyme, it should rhyme.

emma_wicca · Post by **emma_wicca** » Sun Sep 30, 2007 1:43 pm

I think its pretty good