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Hidden in the Fall

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:26 pm
by TheHallow1
Samhain



Hidden in the Fall.
This day is a slowly creeping storm
enveloping the land in darkness.

Hidden in the Fall.
This day is a hand stretching forth
to bring me to nostalgia.

Hidden in the Fall.
This day is the destruction of the barrier
between the seen and unseen.

Hidden in the Fall.
This day is light and dark, yin and yang,
orange harvest and black night.

Hidden in the Fall.
This day is the core of childhood and
the reminiscence in adulthood.

Hidden in the Fall.
This day is a wicked grin on
the face of shadows.

Hidden in the Fall.
This day is a harbored creation of
mischief and delight.

Hidden in the Fall.
This day is my night,
My time,
my nostalgia,
My memory,
my celebration.
Samhain comes now, hidden.

Re: Hidden in the Fall

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:31 pm
by Andybev01
At the risk of encouraging you Sam fixation, I will say that that was very well done. :wink:

Re: Hidden in the Fall

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:23 pm
by TheHallow1
Andybev01 wrote:At the risk of encouraging you Sam fixation, I will say that that was very well done. :wink:
Ha HA very funny. Even YOU should know that Halloween used to called Samhain. (Sow-en)

Re: Hidden in the Fall

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:27 pm
by Spookymufu
yeah Andy, EVEN you....LOL!

Re: Hidden in the Fall

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:33 pm
by Andybev01
Way to throw away a compliment...

Re: Hidden in the Fall

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 11:38 am
by TheHallow1
No, I appreciate the compliment. Thank you.

Re: Hidden in the Fall

Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 9:50 pm
by Midnight Witch
Good.

Re: Hidden in the Fall

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 3:49 pm
by witchy
I loved the poem!! Thanks for sharing it!!

Re: Hidden in the Fall

Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 7:54 am
by Belladonna
Excellent! Thanks for sharing. :)

Re: Hidden in the Fall

Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 4:38 pm
by MacPhantom
Now I'm thinking cool, chilly Autumn thoughts.......

Thanks!!

Re: Hidden in the Fall

Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 11:08 pm
by TheHallow1
Thank you all! 8)

Re: Hidden in the Fall

Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 7:44 pm
by ScarecrowJack
This was nicely done. I really liked the repetition of the first line. Do you write poetry often?

Re: Hidden in the Fall

Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 2:54 pm
by Jack Skellington
Great poem, I really enjoyed it! :D

Re: Hidden in the Fall

Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 12:46 am
by TheHallow1
ScarecrowJack wrote:This was nicely done. I really liked the repetition of the first line. Do you write poetry often?
Nah. I wrote this for a school poetry assignment and with Halloween always on my mind......

Re: Hidden in the Fall

Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 12:48 am
by TheHallow1
Jack Skellington wrote:Great poem, I really enjoyed it! :D
Thank you. I'm happy you liked it.