- TheHallow1
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Hidden in the Fall
Samhain
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is a slowly creeping storm
enveloping the land in darkness.
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is a hand stretching forth
to bring me to nostalgia.
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is the destruction of the barrier
between the seen and unseen.
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is light and dark, yin and yang,
orange harvest and black night.
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is the core of childhood and
the reminiscence in adulthood.
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is a wicked grin on
the face of shadows.
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is a harbored creation of
mischief and delight.
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is my night,
My time,
my nostalgia,
My memory,
my celebration.
Samhain comes now, hidden.
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is a slowly creeping storm
enveloping the land in darkness.
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is a hand stretching forth
to bring me to nostalgia.
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is the destruction of the barrier
between the seen and unseen.
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is light and dark, yin and yang,
orange harvest and black night.
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is the core of childhood and
the reminiscence in adulthood.
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is a wicked grin on
the face of shadows.
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is a harbored creation of
mischief and delight.
Hidden in the Fall.
This day is my night,
My time,
my nostalgia,
My memory,
my celebration.
Samhain comes now, hidden.
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- Andybev01
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Re: Hidden in the Fall
At the risk of encouraging you Sam fixation, I will say that that was very well done.
All you that doth my grave pass by,
As you are now so once was I,
As I am now so you must be,
Prepare for death & follow me.
As you are now so once was I,
As I am now so you must be,
Prepare for death & follow me.
- TheHallow1
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Re: Hidden in the Fall
Ha HA very funny. Even YOU should know that Halloween used to called Samhain. (Sow-en)Andybev01 wrote:At the risk of encouraging you Sam fixation, I will say that that was very well done.
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Re: Hidden in the Fall
yeah Andy, EVEN you....LOL!
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Re: Hidden in the Fall
Way to throw away a compliment...
All you that doth my grave pass by,
As you are now so once was I,
As I am now so you must be,
Prepare for death & follow me.
As you are now so once was I,
As I am now so you must be,
Prepare for death & follow me.
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Re: Hidden in the Fall
Good.
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Re: Hidden in the Fall
I loved the poem!! Thanks for sharing it!!
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Re: Hidden in the Fall
Excellent! Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Hidden in the Fall
Now I'm thinking cool, chilly Autumn thoughts.......
Thanks!!
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Re: Hidden in the Fall
This was nicely done. I really liked the repetition of the first line. Do you write poetry often?
We're the farmer's scarecrows
We scare away the birds,
We keep the farmer's corn safe
Without any words.
But when Halloween comes
We jump out of the ground
And we scare the boys and girls
When they come walking 'round.
We scare away the birds,
We keep the farmer's corn safe
Without any words.
But when Halloween comes
We jump out of the ground
And we scare the boys and girls
When they come walking 'round.
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Re: Hidden in the Fall
Great poem, I really enjoyed it!
Yours in haunting;
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Re: Hidden in the Fall
Nah. I wrote this for a school poetry assignment and with Halloween always on my mind......ScarecrowJack wrote:This was nicely done. I really liked the repetition of the first line. Do you write poetry often?
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- TheHallow1
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Re: Hidden in the Fall
Thank you. I'm happy you liked it.Jack Skellington wrote:Great poem, I really enjoyed it!
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