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Posted: **Sun Sep 06, 2009 4:34 pm**

i just went through some pictures of my little bro and i trick or treating like 15 years ago and man, that was so long ago.. it inspired this writing about me growing older

stay calm, collected and quiet and quite honestly be patient
cause this causes some shakes and we are patiently patented and pointed right through
none of this will matter soon
I'll see how much you can take and how much you can shake off
none of that will matter soon
and before i got the chance to grow old i also learned that
good enough is as good as its gonna get
and as good as it gets you'll be done with it
So now i turned it off and onto something kind
my baptist knees
i used em up for and entirely good
and you thought i was clean..?
now here's the mood that moves me through
"none of that'll matter soon"
sister come take me out i'm nervous and its causing white in my breath
and before you forget
that none of this will matter soon
as good as it gets comes soon
help me keep my feet flat on the ground!

before i thought i could grow to, promote in time
to be inspired by the one i called permanent
a sort of ugly i called delicate
now thats something to dedicate!
i'll keep my funeral notes inside the verses i wrote before i dropped my tone
and fell off key
good enough is as good as its gonna get
none of this will matter soon!

Posted: **Wed Sep 09, 2009 11:12 pm**

Deep writings indeed... good job Adrian.

Posted: **Thu Sep 10, 2009 9:18 am**

ElMuertoMan17 wrote:Deep writings indeed... good job Adrian.

thanks friend! i always look forward to your feed back

Posted: **Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:16 pm**

That was very nice.

Like I always say, none of this matters once you're 6-feet under so don't sweat the small stuff.

Posted: **Fri Oct 02, 2009 7:28 am**

Well done, Adrian.
Very deep.

Posted: **Fri Oct 02, 2009 10:04 am**

Very well done, but very sad. I am a lot older than you and it kinda hits home.
Thanks, Witchy

Posted: **Fri Oct 02, 2009 12:54 pm**

thank you so much guys

i'm loving the feed back

Posted: **Sat Oct 03, 2009 10:37 am**

You're welcome.
I wish I had the talent for it. I've written a little, but I haven't tried this kind of writing.

Posted: **Sun Oct 04, 2009 3:49 pm**

Belladonna wrote:You're welcome.
I wish I had the talent for it. I've written a little, but I haven't tried this kind of writing.

you should try it and post it

i'd love to read something you've written

Posted: **Mon Oct 05, 2009 2:22 pm**

I like them.

adrian wrote:i just went through some pictures of my little bro and i trick or treating like 15 years ago and man, that was so long ago.. it inspired this writing about me growing older

stay calm, collected and quiet and quite honestly be patient
cause this causes some shakes and we are patiently patented and pointed right through
none of this will matter soon
I'll see how much you can take and how much you can shake off
none of that will matter soon
and before i got the chance to grow old i also learned that
good enough is as good as its gonna get
and as good as it gets you'll be done with it
So now i turned it off and onto something kind
my baptist knees
i used em up for and entirely good
and you thought i was clean..?
now here's the mood that moves me through
"none of that'll matter soon"
sister come take me out i'm nervous and its causing white in my breath
and before you forget
that none of this will matter soon
as good as it gets comes soon
help me keep my feet flat on the ground!

before i thought i could grow to, promote in time
to be inspired by the one i called permanent
a sort of ugly i called delicate
now thats something to dedicate!
i'll keep my funeral notes inside the verses i wrote before i dropped my tone
and fell off key
good enough is as good as its gonna get
none of this will matter soon!

Posted: **Mon Oct 05, 2009 2:44 pm**

thanks halloweencom

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