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Shaking hands with the Devil *warning* a little graphic

Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 5:01 pm
by adrian
There are the shadows of sinners in my hands
most of them kind, at once, at one point at least
one time or another

With these hands i've built more sin... homes really
Homes of complete and utter agony
Like the smell from the T.I.T.s of pigs
complete and utter agony

Thats when i decided to shake hands with the devil
Oh Devil, moist and red, flex your muscles and show me a sign of something real
something most devine and un pleasent
he shook back, shaking my bones and nerves
I felt my knees buckle as he turned my knuckles white
how nice. now i've no knuckles to swing with

Like i said.
complete and utter agony with these hands of sins
other's sins though, not mine. i just sort of do them.
then shake hands. deal?

Re: Shaking hands with the Devil *warning* a little graphic

Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 12:38 am
by MyersFan1
That was good! Very deep. Keep up the writing my man.

Re: Shaking hands with the Devil *warning* a little graphic

Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 9:12 am
by adrian
thank you! i tend to start posting all sorts of my poetry for everyone to check otu. deep and dark, light hearted and fun, all sorts of things. I take everyone's feedback straight to heart :) and i appreciate greatly :)

Re: Shaking hands with the Devil *warning* a little graphic

Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 6:38 pm
by ElMuertoMan17
Another great work of yours, Adrian. You have true talent.

Re: Shaking hands with the Devil *warning* a little graphic

Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 11:59 pm
by MyersFan1
ElMuertoMan17 wrote:Another great work of yours, Adrian. You have true talent.
Agreed.

Re: Shaking hands with the Devil *warning* a little graphic

Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 3:41 pm
by adrian
thank you guys for the comments :)

Re: Shaking hands with the Devil *warning* a little graphic

Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 7:44 am
by Belladonna
Wow!
Deep and dark, my kind of thing.
Passing along the sin and the proclivity for it through a handshake.
You are very talented, friend.

Re: Shaking hands with the Devil *warning* a little graphic

Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 12:46 pm
by adrian
Belladonna wrote:Wow!
Deep and dark, my kind of thing.
Passing along the sin and the proclivity for it through a handshake.
You are very talented, friend.

thanks Belladonna :) i'm enjoying your feed back :)