Shaking hands with the Devil *warning* a little graphic

[adrian]

There are the shadows of sinners in my hands
most of them kind, at once, at one point at least
one time or another

With these hands i've built more sin... homes really
Homes of complete and utter agony
Like the smell from the T.I.T.s of pigs
complete and utter agony

Thats when i decided to shake hands with the devil
Oh Devil, moist and red, flex your muscles and show me a sign of something real
something most devine and un pleasent
he shook back, shaking my bones and nerves
I felt my knees buckle as he turned my knuckles white
how nice. now i've no knuckles to swing with

Like i said.
complete and utter agony with these hands of sins
other's sins though, not mine. i just sort of do them.
then shake hands. deal?

[MyersFan1]

That was good! Very deep. Keep up the writing my man.

[adrian]

thank you! i tend to start posting all sorts of my poetry for everyone to check otu. deep and dark, light hearted and fun, all sorts of things. I take everyone's feedback straight to heart and i appreciate greatly

[ElMuertoMan17]

Another great work of yours, Adrian. You have true talent.

[MyersFan1]

Another great work of yours, Adrian. You have true talent.

Agreed.

[adrian]

thank you guys for the comments

[Belladonna]

Wow!
Deep and dark, my kind of thing.
Passing along the sin and the proclivity for it through a handshake.
You are very talented, friend.

[adrian]

Wow!
Deep and dark, my kind of thing.
Passing along the sin and the proclivity for it through a handshake.
You are very talented, friend.

thanks Belladonna i'm enjoying your feed back