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Haunted Tour (poem)

Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 9:28 pm
by grim writer
The eerie shadows with in the night
Hallows eve is a time for fright
Come along on this haunted of tours
Step on to the ferry to the cursed islands shores
As you step onto land you see the skeletons dance
If you’re frightened now turn around this is your last chance
Follow your guide and stay on the trail
Else the goblins will get you with out fail
First sight we see is the graveyard down yonder
Get back with the group, I can’t express, don’t wonder
Next are the witches that we come to
With their black cats, spells, and awful brew
To the left with teeth bared
Are the werewolves but don’t be scared
There to the right are the vampires
Whose pale features are illuminated by the fires
Stop and look, just up ahead
You see the spirits of the dead
Watch out for those webs in the trees
For the makers are unfriendly, beware please
Now here we come up on something not so frightful
But take heed the bats are still spiteful
It’s almost midnight, the bewitching hour
Let’s go before your souls they devour
Back to the ferry let’s go
Hurry up your pace is slow
Now we reached the end of my tour
I hope I wasn’t too much of a bore

Re: Haunted Tour (poem)

Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 10:20 pm
by Haunt Master
That's the greatest poem I've ever read it here!!

GW, you sound like you can become a writer one of these days! ;) I really do like this poem of yours! That's fantastic! :D

Thank you for posting "Haunted Tour" poem story here!!! 8)

Re: Haunted Tour (poem)

Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 1:14 am
by OctoberChill
Love it!

Re: Haunted Tour (poem)

Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 9:47 pm
by grim writer
thanks for the compliments they mean a lot :D

Re: Haunted Tour (poem)

Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 11:55 pm
by vampiress
You are one talented writer!!!